The Ultimate Creation

I was challenged to write about The bride of Frankenstein's monster. So here it is.

 

Oh my master what have you done,

Making another one

The same but also unlike me.

Are these butterflies

Inside my stomach

Spare parts like the rest on me?

If so I want them removed.

Why does this creature

Torment my borrowed heart?

Must be a malfunction

From the human donor

In which it came from,

But then why does it feel so real?

Oh please my master

Dismantle this creation

That brings me an ache

That cannot be explained.

My knees must be defective

Because they feel so weak

When she walks in the room.

What kind of special power

Did you grace it with?

For it is not fair

To be powerless against it.

What kind of eyes

Did you put in that experiment?

For they draw me in

Making me feel vulnerable

And I can’t have that.

For someone built to be alone

I have a sudden urge

To have a companion,

More specifically that monstrosity

You brought to life.

Respectively my master

I do believe you made a mistake.

Oh no, why does it stand so close to me?

I must be allergic

Cause I got a tickle in my throat

And I can barely breathe.

Why has she put her

Stolen hand in mine?

Now I feel a rush more electric

That the lightening

That brought me to life.

Make it stop master,

Make it go away,

Oh master I…

Never mind my master

For I will accept this fate

You have bestowed upon me

For I know it is too late

To run from this connection

That scares me.

Oh and master,

One last thing…

You’ve done fine work here.

Reviews

[Muse]

Now we know how Adam felt...when he first met incredible Eve. The rib borrowed from his body...to create woman flesh. To know that you are that much apart of somebody...it's enchanting...a freak of nature...or a beautiful mistake. It doesn't matter really...the concept is beautiful enough to inspire the minds of millions of readers. You scored well on this challenge. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you, thank you very much, it was fun to create... and I didn't need lightening to do it.

[Mia]

Scored well enough to get a prize?
Just saying ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hehehe.... listen to her and give it to me ;)

[Muse]

This was not a test...

good grief.

lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good grief? Who are you? Charlie Brown... Lol

[Muse]

no I'm tigger

tigger the cat woohoo!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Everyone loves a tigger cause tiggers are wonderful things.... My favorite Pooh character.

[Lily Mae]

You took the challenge and came out on the great side of it.. :) I love it.. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Spank you very much, I mean thank you very much xoxo

[Renée]

shocking .. lol Man or Monster.. I love reading what goes on in the male mind !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh you do not wan to get in my mind cause there is no escape. Thank you for the read.

[Renée]

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