Dancing In The Rain

 

Little droplets cascade softly to the ground

Like musical notes from heaven’s violin,

I take your hand guiding you to

This lovely serenade falling all around us.

 

Let the world think we are crazy

For letting nature soak drench our skin,

They are the fools missing out on feeling

The purest emotions mother earth gives us.

 

Under the silver lining in the sky

We dance across cloud nine in style

Striding across a rainbow without the sun

Lifting us above what darkens passion.

 

Dancing till the last raindrop

Cleanses the scars around our hearts

Washing away the dirt of past hurt,

Nurturing the seed of tomorrow’s spring.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A warm day and gentle rain. Nice day for a walk and love. The good description create a good vision. Spring seem like a long way away. Need a warm day to dance and be content in the rain. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again sir.

[Renée]

Oh what is it about the rain that calls us out to play...Perfect subject & Beautiful poem...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... I find the rain so soul cleansing... I can be at peace no mater what is going on when I am listening and watching it. And it can be romantic with the right person.

[Renée]

Agreed..

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Ah...so refreshingly lovely and so well written with grace and beauty. Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass; it's about learning to dance in the rain

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much :)

[Seashell]

This is wonderful
It flows so naturally that I was carried away... And got drenched.. Lol
I must ALSO be mad as dancing in the rain appeals to me more n more
I love the way you use the metaphors
Fantastic xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you babsie boop :)

[Poetic Beauty]

There is nothing wrong with enjoy the simple pleasures on life. They are moments.we shall.treasure lime gold later.in life. Beautiful poem. I happen to love the rain

[Jenny Nelson]

Beautiful. Uplifting and peaceful feel to it. I really like the raindrops being describe as musical notes. Adds another dimension to this lovely piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Omg, thank you so much... It has been a while... Glad you enjoyed it.

[Jenny Nelson]

Wish I could be back here, but wow have times been crazy. Thought I'd take a few minutes and read. Really did love your poem.

[Chris]

Hope-full...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

nature is always hopeful cause it is an endless miracle.

[That1Nerd23]

This is a lovely and beautiful poem! Very detailed, yet your thoughts and feelings are still immersed in every line. Excellent job!

[Dean Kuch®]

This captures so well the freedom that can be felt simply by standing in a rain shower, letting it cool your body on a hot summer day. Those who say, 'He doesn't even have enough sense to come in out of the rain' have obviously never tried it. It is envigorating, as is your poem!
Well done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the review... that quote is so true.