Dancing In The Rain

 

Little droplets cascade softly to the ground

Like musical notes from heaven’s violin,

I take your hand guiding you to

This lovely serenade falling all around us.

 

Let the world think we are crazy

For letting nature soak drench our skin,

They are the fools missing out on feeling

The purest emotions mother earth gives us.

 

Under the silver lining in the sky

We dance across cloud nine in style

Striding across a rainbow without the sun

Lifting us above what darkens passion.

 

Dancing till the last raindrop

Cleanses the scars around our hearts

Washing away the dirt of past hurt,

Nurturing the seed of tomorrow’s spring.

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

I love walking/dancing in the rain.. This is a truley lovely piece Cowboy.. The very beginning line
"Little droplets cascade softly to the ground
Like musical notes from heaven’s violin,"
and I was already hooked .. xo Rose

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow, thank you lovely Rose... so glad you liked it. xo

[Holly Mason]

we dance across cloud nine in style- really like the mind pictures this invokes for me
actually I am looking up again...and I just adore many of the lovely lines in this piece
great imagery through out
glad it is raining here...I will head out for a dance
gorgeous words...yes gorgeous
thank you fine rock and roll sir, for sharing

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much young lady.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I came back to read this and WOW! Still touches my soul... still as breathtaking as the first time I read it...

Lovely, lovely, lovely write!~xoxo~:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you so much... that you came bad to read it again means a lot.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Lovely ...... well done ..

Jasmine :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sweet Jazzy xo

[J. J. Nightingale]

:).................................... ♥♥

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned and it is pouring down rain as I read this which added to the essence of your poem Dale.:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Lucky you, I would love some rain here... glad you liked it.

[Marie]

Lovely. Why shouldn't people dance in the rain? I can't think of a better place...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yes I agree, thank Marie.

[Rita L. Sev]

Under the silver lining in the sky
We dance across cloud nine in style... :)

This is such a sensually beautiful read. Dancing in the rain - literally, and figuratively - cleansing, exhilarating, wonderful!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The rain is one of natures greatest miracles... I can listen to the rain and feel at peace no matter what is happening.

[Angi]

Dancing in the rain is a favorite thing to do. I feel so clean after a good drenching like that. Love this, Cowboy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

People think we are crazy to dance in the rain, I say they are missing out on life.

[Corset]

such a warm and beautiful sway of water, how beautifully perfect is a day after the rain? So clean, so fresh, so breathtaking, as is this poem! You are a romantic!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... I love the rain, so spiritually cleansing.