Loveless Breath

More poetry that just needs to leave my mind.

I want to breath you in and never exhale. 

How can my mind feel so blessed when a thought of you emerges?

Like light leaking through window shades. 

I can feel daylight incept into my star filled darkness. 

Clenching my heart,

Knowing pain that has no words to describe. 

Screaming as if I were in a crib,

wishing that my mother wouldn't leave. 

There is something new, 

This feeling...

Everything around me is silent, 

 I can't notice it through my screaming. 

I want to reach out wide and never revert. 

When I know, you will be there to reach with me. 

Bursting forth to deepest areas of knowledge and experience.

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Beautifully written poem, I love the formatting styles you use with your poetry. You know how to make the visual presentation flow with the poem itself, deepening the emotion in this piece even more. at least, that's what I got out of it as a reader. Excellent poem.

[paparapapa]

Really intense and emotional. Great job on this one. :)

[Kaylor Mason]

There are some rare poems which can only be praised by pure, reverent silence . . . this is one of 'em. Gorgeous! :)

[sivan]

tHIS IS A GREAT WRITE SO GLAD TO HAVE STUMBLED ACROSS IT