Please Fight

I had a really bad experience... two days before my day of birth... I said no... I said no...

I said no...

You f*****g w***e

Kill yourself!!

Please No more!

Kill yourself!!

In the depths of the night...

In a little place called San Francisco.

There was 17, 

She had had too much to drink...

Along comes this spider, 

He came with his arms out wide. 

17 froze in fear, 

and was taken within the web...

or in this case... an elevator...

17 screamed "No! No please!"

but there was no one to save her...

She suffocated on the poisonous rod that was shoved into her mouth...

but there was no one to save her...

The spider caressed 17's face and said, 

"Beautiful... Beautiful..."

17 tried to run away

She was trapped in a web

so she cried anyway. 

Then some others looked in, watched and laughed...

as 17 was trying to gasp for air. 

The others took out their cameras and laughed...

as 17 was pulled by the hair.

The spider kept saying to 17 as he made her suck,

"Your such a f*****g w***e, and you will always be that way."

Then the spider started to f**k.

While she cried... 17 waited for the light of day.

But there was no one to save her...

He bruised up her shoulders and threw her around.

All she could say was "no please..." as she cried more. 

She's not worth one pound.

"You F*****g W***e!!"

"You F*****g W***e!!"

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Now here is 17... in her dorm turning 18...

No one around to hear her

She sees herself in the mirror

"You f*****g W***e..."

No one to save her...

From slapping herself hard in the face. 

Slapping until she bruises.

Slapping until she can't lift her hand.

Hitting that face that the spider called "Beautiful..."

Destroy the face that that spider gazed at

Praying to anyone that she could see her Kat...

Praying to anyone desperately...

 

With each blow a new pain is born, 

a new moment to mourn. 

She opened that palm and kept slapping as she cried and wished that she died.

The bruises started to form and she never felt so forlorn. 

18 hurt herself mercilessly 

She could only see the poison spreading through her veins

Then she waited for one person... just one person...

but he wasn't coming...

she knew this...

there is no one to save her.

No matter how much she wished that he would return...

no matter how much she pleaded with the gods...

She couldn't do anything... because she left...

she made a mistake by leaving home

And mistakes... don't go unpunished...

Author's Note

I said no... to the man... who... ra-.... me...

Reviews

[ron]

Very strong. Your brave to pu to words such an experience, words that more need to see to undrestand. Makes me feel less because Im a man, I know that wasnt your intention. I'm glade you wrote it, more people should write about there darkest feelings and emotions it makes others see pain in its truest form. Once again thank you for sharing.

[Kaylor Mason]

I read this and could only stomach it one time--I won't come back to it. One time was all I'll need to remember every line. I really don't know what to say in this review, except . . . you have my respect. Any other words would be insulting

[Wolfwind Words]

A powerful flow of words that brings with it a deep reflective look into humanities state of negative affairs. I do hope that the time between then and now has allowed for some healing. No one should ever have to endure such an experience, but it happens. Hope and light to you.

Wolfie

[Joiedevivre]

very powerful, almost made me cry. Felt very angry and frustrated reading this. Sympathise with you as i been through similar situation.
You conveyed the experience really well.
Take your pain and make something with it, its an outlet poetry.
I also thought the way you depersonalised it by using 17 was awesome.

[MandaBear]

Good writing.

[Rossen]

I can only read this once, but all never forget the impact.
strong words that needed to be put down.
Good writing.

[Alex Zynder]

I like how you used the number 17, ive never seen that before, truly original

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Very powerful, gut wrenching. I hope healing is happening. The assailant is not a man. The young Woman is NOT a w***e.
My Daughter is 21, living in Tokyo, living it up. All I can do is have faith.

[GTVile]

Wow. You certainly do a great job of getting your point across. Its definitely powerful.