What do I want?

What do I want?

A Poem by Gigi
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Stating the obvious, releasing my mind upon the paper of what I write.

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 I want time to stop going fast,

like the known wind going past.

I want the ability to grow to the age I wish, 

then I would have the world on a dish.

I want to be able to touch and hold,

without having to worry how things will unfold.

I want the strength to be left with my dignity in tact,

even though I know your gone, i'll accept the fact.

I want to have the permission to fall,

so I can love you, and get past this wall!

 

 

So many things I want now...

 

 

But I don't think I even know how...

 

 

To get things that I want,

 

 

So i'll close my mind and let my head bow.

 

 

 

 

Focus now on what I need, then later on, what I want.

© 2009 Gigi


Author's Note

Gigi
So emotional, what stupid stuff to say... >.>

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this is so nice,it had a very special lovely feel to it
would love to touch and hold no worry how things unfold
want time to stop..so many things i would want though never knew how
this is really so dreamy ..you could go on with this..i really loved it
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Gigi, the last line said it all.

Yes, we need air, but sometimes we sacrifice even that, for our want.

Really enjoyed this, thank you!
Antonio


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 2, 2009

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Gigi
Gigi

Traverse Town, CA



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