They End

They End

A Poem by deadlife
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We.

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Me.

 

 

 

© 2010 deadlife


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deadlife
... it is sad.

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Ego sum qui sum. We are all one as a species here on earth. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


we: soul.




me: realization has hit.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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day and night
alone

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think you really did a great job of conveying what you wanted to say in only two words! This was really creative cause not too many people can do this in the way you have and even though it was a simple piece, it was strong enough to be heard. Great work and keep writing!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice ... fantastic work on reflections ...me reflects "we" n you reflects.......


Posted 14 Years Ago


I like how you put the message so that it is understandable but very simple. Nice piece of work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is one of the most beautiful work I have come across lately. Just Two words but they convey so much. Amazing creativity. Telling a lot with few words is really difficult but you pulled it off well.
Keep up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 9, 2010
Last Updated on March 9, 2010
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deadlife
deadlife

New Delhi, India



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I was born. I live. I'll die. I know nothing. Where I came from? Where will I go? I'm ignorant of my existance. I'm uncertain of myself. No beliefs. No religion. No god. Know Go.. more..

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