Have a good laugh!

Have a good laugh!

A Poem by deadlife
"

life is a great laughter...love, laugh, live.

"

 

Do laugh and laugh for time a lot,

For this may change the wholly plot…

To be awaken till fall asleep

Do laugh and laugh you long and deep

Don’t laugh to show, not laugh for them

Just laugh to laugh and laugh you then

Not make it happen but let it done

It’s not as tough, just let it come

Be no-one then, no mind will left

Not possess it but be possessed

Not look for reason, nor seek you cause

Just have a laugh you before the pause

-

A good laugh once a day would do

But good for you, if you have two!

 

It’s all the same, a day so long

For always being so bright and strong

It’s all the same, a night so dark

For always being so dull and hard

Changes will hap, changes would hap

But always being no time would lap

It passes now and passing then

And pass away leaving no man

-

Then why do not, we laugh a day

A laugh will lead more laughs to may

 

It leads a day happy and great

If you’ve laughed, early or late

 

Look at you and it makes you laugh

But with a view on other’s behalf

Laugh with those, who laugh at you

With anger-pride, it’s nothing to do

Look at this world of absurdities

It’s filled and full with comedies

God, who’s watching this for times ago

He must be dying of laughter’s blow-

Look at the man, his wrath and deeds

This surely makes you laugh indeed

 

Laugh and then you may perceive

Laughing then all dismay and grief

 

And if you look at nature too

She’ll also be laughing then with you…

 

Laughing the insects, birds and beasts

Laughing the grass, buds, flowers, trees

Laughing the rocks, waters and wind

Laughing the earth and the heavens

Laughing the sun, the stars and moon

Laughing it morning, laughing it noon

Laughing time, days, nights and seasons…

Laughing all matters, all reasons

-

It’s laughing all then why you quiet?

Just laugh with angels pure and white

 

Laugh like those innocent children are

Just laugh…for this be the last hour!

© 2008 deadlife


Author's Note

deadlife
it's something i wrote about 7 years back...but now finally i decided to post it here... =]

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First of all, Thank god that you came up with this piece which is like quite long and is actually very different from your other writes, that's the thing which I admire most!
now...coming to the write...It has been beautifully written and such an amazing flow!

"And if you look at nature too

She'll also be laughing then with you�"-Wow such a great metaphor!!

Laughter is really the best thing to do and thanks a lot for starting my day so well :D :D

Great write! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Really, this made me smile! And laugh of course! It's so light, nothing too complex just a great message. Laughter is lovely therapy.

-Travis

Posted 16 Years Ago


ha ha ha! I'm still laughing!
nice usage of language! I'm pumped ^-^

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like the piece and your word play was great. I liked how is flowed seamless and with such a purposefulness. The message behind the words is a very important life lesson that needs to be learn by all. We must be able to enjoy the small wonders of life to truly appreciate it at all.


Great Job!!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Thank you ...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

laughter is a great major/important aspect in my life. life would be so boring without it. and yes, i make sure that i laugh everyday. your poem describes laughter very good and decribes mos people very sood. very well done! glad you posted it. thank you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true. Laugh until we seem almost insane. Life is definetly better with a sense of humor.


Great Write. I enjoyed this one.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! Laughter is important. It helps even when you are feeling down. Great work! I loved the last stanza. I work with children and it is funny watching them laugh over nothing. How nice to be reminded its okay to laugh!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I adore this piece - fantasic.

You had me from the first line and kept me smiling all the way through. A full head on, gut bust laugh does us all good.

There are too many lines here that are my faves

(((((applause))))) going among my favourites.

Thanks for sharing this one.

jen - JG

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Finally, someone else appreciates the importance and the benefits of laughter. I love to laugh and will find any opportunity to do so. Sometimes, I make opportunities. I make other people laugh so that I can laugh because their laugh is funny.

For the write itself, I love it. I love the message, the language, the flow and the voice. The lines themselves are splendid.

It's filled and full with comedies
God, who's watching this for times ago
He must be dying of laughter's blow-

These are my favorite lines. I couldn't agree more. I think God must surely have a sense of humor. I know if I were in His position, I'd be laughing my butt off. Heck, I laugh often enough and I don't have the benefit of His point of view. So many aspects of life are humorous.

I laugh with those who laugh at me too. Sometimes I am funny! As embarrassing as some things are, they are funny too. A good person is one who can laugh at him- or herself. Thanks for posting this piece. It's splendid.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is the best medicine...

Good form, good choice of words, very good emphasis on the message.

Good read

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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