i want to...
A Poem by
deadlife
© 2008 deadlife
Author's Note
i think i'm shrinking...literally! :)
Reviews
It's so powerful for how simple it is. One word draws so much more attention, and it keeps echoing in my head. I like in the title how it says "I want", as if you don't have life yet and desire it the most above all things. It's so hard to actually LIVE.
Right on.
Posted 16 Years Ago
i liked it! one word
simple
exquisite
unique
and to the point
good job
Posted 16 Years Ago
i liked it! one word
simple
exquisite
unique
and to the point
good job
This is such a clever write man!
Damn! This actually said too much...
and the way you included the title in it..
Nice work!
Posted 16 Years Ago
This is such a clever write man!
Damn! This actually said too much...
and the way you included the title in it..
Nice work!
Good one!!! (I mean it ;)!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Good one!!! (I mean it ;)!
This was great! I like how you said so much with one word. A lot of power in just one word. Very good idea!
Posted 16 Years Ago
This was great! I like how you said so much with one word. A lot of power in just one word. Very good idea!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow! Nice demonstration how one can say so much with only one word, or four words including the title!
Yes this says it all what there is about the existence of all beings here on earth. We all want to live or we wouldn't be here at all.
Very short, but pretty good job!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Wow! Nice demonstration how one can say so much with only one word, or four words including the title!
Yes this says it all what there is about the existence of all beings here on earth. We all want to live or we wouldn't be here at all.
Very short, but pretty good job!
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deadlife New Delhi, India
About
I was born.
I live.
I'll die.
I know nothing.
Where I came from?
Where will I go?
I'm ignorant of my existance.
I'm uncertain of myself.
No beliefs.
No religion.
No god.
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