i want to...

 

 

 

 

Live

 

 

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Author's Note

i think i'm shrinking...literally! :)

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

Your title shows the desire - (I want to)

LIVE


This title can be taken to so many places - want to what?

LIVE

it is simple in it's complexity, because to me, it shows the depth of despair, of dwelling in the dark places and finally having the guts to shout " bugger off - I WANT TO LIVE!.

VERY WELL DONE - stop shrinking and e x p a n d, your life is there waiting - go live it.

Cheers

jen

[poddar kushal]

and
such a good habit
it is.

[Laughing Lunatic]

Lol the shortest writing I have ever read. =) Thanks for the smile!

[laceyjane23]

very, very, simple yet is sends a powerful message that i think all of us can relate to in so many different ways.
laceyjane

[KayOss]

Shrinking happens sometimes. This one caught me by surprise... It's the shortest writing I've read. Yet, it manages to convey a complete thought and even branches off into different messages, each of which is fun to contemplate. Maybe it's a poem. Maybe it's a sentence. But it still manages to provoke thought and discussion, so that can't be bad.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I have the urge to strangely disagree with every review that's been posted so far. It's just I'm not sure if this would be poetry, more like a sentence. I guess I just don't understand this.

Sorry for the honesty.
Rayne

[EliJoLee]

looved it.
simple. yet very moving. totally hit me.

[Kara Emily Krantz]

wow. that was really shocking to me, and it struck me really hard, right in my heart.

it made me feel like a fool for ever thinking otherwise, especially knowing what little i do know about you and your life.

thank you

big hugs

[Natalie C]

Hell yeah, you do that! Live - be alive.
Great to hear someone actually say that seeing that that isn't something I think about too often....
Darkness more my line of thinking but hey great to know there is still a couple of die hards in this life

Nice "shrink"

[forfila]

You are Alive,,, I guess life is what we make of it given our cirrcumstance..

Nice thought..