Can you...?

 

Can you buy me love, dear ?

~

 

No, but still… I LOVE YOU.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is so warm and romantic..
Love is really too precious for anyone to buy..

Actually, it reminded me of a short story when a girl asked her boy for the reason of his love.
he didn't replied..but when she insisted he complimented her smile, her way of talking, the way she walks and dance and told her that's the reason of his love to her..
Unfortunately, after a week that girl struck an accident and went on unconsciousness...and that time her boy came with a note written that...
"I actually didn't love you for your smile, your dance or your walk...
I love for what you are... and it's something which neither money could buy nor words could explain.."


hmm!
Great write! brilliant indeed 8-)

[poddar kushal]

it is dazzling piece of a poetry that defies time and space. characters too, if i may say so. i cannot miss the sweet-bitter taste and hidden sarcasm.

[Fran Marie]

A sweet and romantic piece~so nicely penned THanks for sharing~Fran

[Lena Vanelslander]

One of the fe things not to buy or for sale :), she doesn't buy, you give ...
As usual I like it (certainly that pause you insert with 'but still ...')!