RAISE

 

 

crush the chains,

spread thy wings-

flap. . .

fly!

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Awesome imagery :)
I liked this piece a lot. Very poignant and intense!

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This is good! I love how you painted a great image with so few of words. I think this is very good!

[Olivera]

This is great. Inovative. Visualy strong, almost painted.

[Lena Vanelslander]

Hm, love it - catchy, great message originaly brought ... just don't fly too high, wouldn't want you to fall from the sky ;-)

[Candle in the wind]

Yes we all want to break free of all fetters I empathize and want to as well

[Floating on the feather..]

Thats pretty nice.... succinct yet poignant.

Resembles the feelings of every being....break-free and fly away in a world thats your own.

Good write.

[Angel Bird]

Yes ... that's what life and/or death is all about. Break free and let the elements and your own will guide you and enjoy even each and every intake of breath ...

Few words - great impact!

[forfila]

Simple, directive, and good intentions, ya know what, that it is a perfect use of language.

Nice