RAISE

RAISE

A Poem by deadlife
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crush the chains,

spread thy wings-

flap. . .

fly!

 

© 2008 deadlife


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short sweet to the point great write

Posted 15 Years Ago


SOAR


Very surprising! I was expecting something longer! haha
Cheers and Good luck in the contest! Laura

Posted 16 Years Ago


Hey!

Absolutely!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


yes i need them to take a flight.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A very uplifting piece, Great write ^_^

Posted 16 Years Ago


well well. wasn't expecting that. it was quite uplifting. :) yes.. the excitement, the urgency. i love that word - it described it perfectly ( i stole it from KayOss) - the sense of urgency this piece creates. :)



Posted 16 Years Ago


Everything combines here to paint a wonderful picture... The excitement and urgency... You manage to say so much with so little. Another great write, here.

Posted 16 Years Ago


You have the gift of inspiring so much with such brevity....this poem sets my mind off in several directions at once. Nice work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very powerful in so few words - uplifting. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sound here, is what works so well. I read it outloud and loved the way I heard it.

-Travis

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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deadlife

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