RAISE

 

 

crush the chains,

spread thy wings-

flap. . .

fly!

 

Reviews

[E-man]

short sweet to the point great write

[Laura E. Aranda]

SOAR


Very surprising! I was expecting something longer! haha
Cheers and Good luck in the contest! Laura

[Emily B]

Hey!

Absolutely!!!!

[poddar kushal]

yes i need them to take a flight.

[!!..Love..!!]

A very uplifting piece, Great write ^_^

[Kara Emily Krantz]

well well. wasn't expecting that. it was quite uplifting. :) yes.. the excitement, the urgency. i love that word - it described it perfectly ( i stole it from KayOss) - the sense of urgency this piece creates. :)

[KayOss]

Everything combines here to paint a wonderful picture... The excitement and urgency... You manage to say so much with so little. Another great write, here.

[Tania Leigh]

You have the gift of inspiring so much with such brevity....this poem sets my mind off in several directions at once. Nice work.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Very powerful in so few words - uplifting. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Travis Lawrence]

The sound here, is what works so well. I read it outloud and loved the way I heard it.

-Travis