i want PEACE.

peace.war.life.

i want peace.

 

oh..please...
i want peace

 

...

let there be WAR!

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

I immensely like the blatant controversy that is in all of your writings.

It's great how you let it open which peace you mean

- peace like death where you'll no longer have anything to do with the human quarrels and life in general
or
- peace like peace between humans as long as you're no longer concerned directly with it and only watch it on TV

Definitely thought provoking! Very well done because the thinking process goes on in the readers mind ...

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This is good. I like your style of writing. Not many people can make the statements you do this way. I like how you ended this poem. Very nice!

[PhoeniX]

wow great twist! good one

[jen -- JG]

A clever little write here.
Two different voices wanting peace.

As always two sides to a coin- two answers to a problen and sometimes one of the answers to a peaceful solution is war.

It's a little like someone telling someone ' I'll fix this even if it kills me"


I like this - it makes me think of all the possible areas it could fit.

Thank You

jen-JG

[forfila]

When its come to a head, and war becomes the one sole possible outcome from a dia situation. But I love the concept, and I see a certain truth there.

Nice!

[Tania Leigh]

It is quite ironic that it takes war to achieve peace.....or we think it does.

This is a powerful little write!

[Kara Emily Krantz]

ah, the great battles cry that seems to be everywhere. all this talk of peace, but constant declarations and continuances of war.

hugs

[!!..Love..!!]

Frankly speaking,
I didn't get it when I read it first ^-^
but then I got it very well and all I can say is that this is an amazing write!

[Candle in the wind]

This peace seems to be like the stillness of death after war perhaps you intended to evoke that chill.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I liked this scheme of drawing parallel irony a lot!
Great write :)