Passing by me...

life.truth.action.steps.

It’s passing by me again and again,
This time also I cannot
Cannot hold life…
Confined to this realm of freedom
Exposing myself to truth-
With a reality
Breaking the chains, I’m ready to fly
Alone.

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

This is very intense and even dramatic for I think you're speaking of dying and death.
You think life will pass you by again, and there's no other option as slipping into an other sphere may it be death or stealing oneself away into your own world of dreams and passions.
Yes when life becomes too tough its easier to escape into a world where no hurt and no unfulfilled wishes exist.
I hope you're talking here of dreaming the world the way you'd like it to be, and that you're not hinting at drugs.

You achieved an avalanche of thoughts with your lines. You've done a good job!

[PhoeniX]

a spur thought of living a life untamed

[Steve Thompson]

Solid write, breaking the norms. You got your point across in a small write. Good job.

[KayOss]

So spread your wings and fly! We aren't meant to hold life, but to experience it. Life is a huge thing that cannot be contained, though we endeavor to box it up. Great work, here.

[EliJoLee]

woww. amazing. intense. short but too the point. lovee it.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a piece in it's raw form and that's why it is so deep and intense.
Powerful but short.
Great write! :)

[!!..Love..!!]

Short and intense! nice one

[poddar kushal]

yes. this is intense with feeling.