Let it be LIFE.

Let there be depth inside
The core of uncertainty, the reasons;
Underneath the abyss of dark reasons
Unpredicted laws should suffer.
In the rage of convincing efforts, these blowing
Clouds would enter a mind;
Inherit incubated intelligence,
Giving dark shadows to the light:
Shadows of dark reasons to thoughts,
Throwing chains, making it slave.

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Confined to the limits of certainty
Let there be freedom of thoughts,
Wings to soar high, far… to the skies unknown.
Finding what is bound to be found,
Burning desires give light to the dark.
Passion surpasses every order
Let things be unpredicted, not laws.

No Laws.

Let it be LIFE.

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

Life is what we make it and the way we live it. Some laws are neded for safety and security and some boundaries are required to help teach but overall there is too much binding and holding back.

I like the way your poem shows the dark and light side of laws.

Life should be lived and not be strangled by some laws.

Let there be light and life.

well done

jen

[KayOss]

Life is rules unbound. That is, life as it as meant to be. Rules are just shackles on life. Some of these rules are necessary, but many others are not. Go out and live life as it's meant to be. Try not to put too many shackles on it.

I love this poem... It's so wonderful that there isn't even much to say about it. Thanks so much for sharing this work.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is according to me your best piece till yet!
I simply loved it..

"No Laws.

Let it be LIFE."

Such a powerful write it is with a deep meaning inside it!
Awesome! :)

[Kara Emily Krantz]

gorgeous piece. beginning with the title. i loved what you had to say here, and your choice of words is just... fantastic. and you manage to not be too intellectual or condescending with your choices, while still making a powerful statement of honest truth.

"Let there be depth inside
The core of uncertainty, "

love that :)

Hugs

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Let things be unpredicted, not laws. - Amen! Great write here, darling! Simply terrific!
Wow. I must read more of you....hmmm. I wonder what else I have been missing!

[Kasey Klein]

"Death is not the opposite of birth; birth and death are siblings."

Hello Deadlife. Thanks for the request to read.

An impassioned existential plea, well presented.

[PhoeniX]

strong words with real meaning. good write