Shortcut To HELL.

Shortcut To HELL.

A Poem by deadlife
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Down the street
There's a shortcut to Hell.
A lane,
A narrow one.
You must've passed it by,
Once.
Everybody does.
Everyday.
It's a narrow lane, Green.
Just down the street.
The next time you cross
I'll be there, for you
Cleaning all the debts
Lying DEAD.

© 2008 deadlife


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This is a good one... It chilling and creepy. Certainly food for thought. To think, people could pass by something like that every day and not even notice. It's amazing what people pass by while they rush to live their lives. Well done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Chilling. one can take many many things away from this short poem. What I get is that everyday we make our choices and one bad choice can let us in a very bad direction very quickly. Well said.

Posted 17 Years Ago


oo creepy! i dont think i want to pass the short cut to hell. this was good

Posted 17 Years Ago



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New Delhi, India



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