These Thoughts

I had written this when I was having horrible thoughts about myself, it truly speaks to me

These thoughts I have are killing me

This is no joke 

These thoughts are brutal and scary

They scare me so much 

I'm afraid I'll give in to these thoughts

These thoughts I have aren't very happy

No, they're much worse

They make me think of killing myself

Ending everything, all those memory's gone forever

Should I just give in to these thoughts

Let the world see what they've done

Cause once I'm gone, no one will miss the girl who was never pretty enough

The girl who just wanted to feel love

The girl who lost everyone around her

These thoughts have just won

Author's Note

Tell me what you guys think cx

Reviews

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I agree that this is powerful and very well written. you have shown a wonderful display of skill, I especially like the way your flow/rhythm felt in this. Great piece.

[Diana Lynn]

Wow, this is very powerful. I can relate to this. I like it.