Spearmint Kisses

Your lips,

They taste like spearmint

From the tube of toothpaste

 You’ve just used.

And your eyes

Become the ocean.

I could swim in them,

For days on end.

 

 

You’re tongue is one of silver

Making words like magic,

You draw me in.

Fine lines begin to blur.

And I can’t tell if you

Or your mouth is sweeter. 

I swear you’ve found my weakness

For spearmint kisses.

 

Kiss me on the edge of tomorrow,

Kiss me for eternity,

What does it really matter?

Just so long as you kiss me.

Author's Note

More lyrics, guys! I was thinking about what it'd be like to kiss a certain someone and thought of them tasting like spearmint and my mind just shot off from there.

They're not complete, obviously. :P

Reviews

[Alicia Beavis]

I felt the third and fourth lines of the first stanza could be removed because, to me, it took away from the romanticism of the piece and isn't necessarily that relevant.

Otherwise, I quite enjoyed it. It was sweet and I had a smile on my face by the end of it. I don't know, it just had an almost innocent tone to it that I found endearing.

Nice!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. No wasted words. Direct and honest thoughts made the poem a pleasure to read. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote