I Am Nothing Compared to a Rose

I Am Nothing Compared to a Rose

A Poem by devon

Is it possible for someone,

A wonderful someone,

To love a wallflower such as me?

Fore I am surely nothing,

Compared to the satin petals of a rose.

 

Am I truly deserving

Of the sunny rays exuding from love?

Will the warmness ever grace my stem?

I am hopeful of it, for I will wilt

Without the ever quenching love.

© 2012 devon


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devon
If it's anything, then it's a work in progress. :P

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I love the comparison of the wall 'flower' to the rose

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! What an awesome write! I love the feel of this piece. This is beautifully and delicately written. The flow and texture of this is wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you!

You are all so lovely and appreciated!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A wallflower such as me? I love this wonderful poem, imagery is very visual, thnakyou :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful, I really enjoyed this write.
Such pondering thoughts as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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