Happiness

Wet dog nose kisses,

Grass blades tickling your feet -

Happiness is this.

Author's Note

Haiku #3 written for a contest.

Reviews

[Spencer Barker]

Wow! Reading this made me happy too. Even with the simplicity that it is, you achieve at making the reader feel your thoughts and well... feel happy. Well done, Devon! A very sweet piece, indeed. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

This made me smile so much. How I love to walk barefoot in the summer, and my precious little dog is endlessly kissing. Pure joy. xo

[devon]

I'm glad you could feel the happiness I tried to radiate off of this piece!

[Inject Positivity]

Awww!!! Such a sweet and soothing haiku....So many thoughts of happiness hidden in 3 small lines....Very sweetly done, the first line captured my whole heart.....Full ratings!!! I do believe this one can win the contest.....

[Beccy]

Such bliss portrayed in so few words. I love the imagery, can see every little last detail in my mind's eye.

First prize, second prize and third prize all rolled into one!

Beccy.

[Sage]

Awe, I love my dogs! And outdoor concerts with bare feet :) summertime baby! Thanks for sharing and capturing this feeling so beautifully!

[devon]

Thank you! I love that you said "summertime baby", because I was trying to capture the image of a happy, blissful summer afternoon. Thank you for reading and reviewing!