Coronation

As you lay her

Lifeless body

To sleep

 

After you’ve brushed

Her colorless

Cheeks

 

And you’ve noticed every

Little something-less

Thing

 

Lay a ring of flowers

Upon her head,

 

A moment of crowning glory

For the dead

Reviews

[MissMellemonroe]

amazing. you got my respect.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

One word...wow

[devon]

Two words: thank you!

[AlexValkyrie]

You're very talented. Well done.

[devon]

Thank you so much!

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I think the somber tone helps and you've used some good imagery in this. I think you could have expanded more, but either way, good work.

[devon]

Thank you!