Unsatisfiable

The way you always laid

Your hand next to my own

Caused an unsatisfiable urge to

See our fingers

Entwined.

The way your fingertips

Kiss my flesh

Makes me wonder how 

It would feel if your lips 

Were next.

Reviews

[ChemicalMadness]

I liked this. Short and simple. Also very true....

I believe the "you" in the second line of the first stanza should be "your", though.

Nice work.
CM.

[devon]

Thank you, again. I fixed the little error in line 2.

:)