What Went Unshed
A Poem by devon
He whispered promisesTo never hurt her again As he wiped away
Her tears That never even fell.
© 2013 devon
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wow, what a lovely n deep write..."AS HE WIPED AWAY, HER TEARS THAT NEVER EVEN FELL"...what a great line, you' should have to continue it...i wannna read more about it indeed....
well penned, beautiful n short write...
great job, you've much higher skills than me :)
Have this 99/100 ;)
Have a nice writin',
take care.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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wow, what a lovely n deep write..."AS HE WIPED AWAY, HER TEARS THAT NEVER EVEN FELL"...what a great line, you' should have to continue it...i wannna read more about it indeed....
well penned, beautiful n short write...
great job, you've much higher skills than me :)
Have this 99/100 ;)
Have a nice writin',
take care.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 3, 2013
Last Updated on April 3, 2013
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devon | 18 | wannabe writer
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