Celestial

I wish to

Hang the stars

On a string

Around my neck.

 

I dream of

Suspending planets

From my ceiling

By threads.

 

I long to

Count every speck of

Hazel in the brown

Of your eyes.

 

How every inch

Of me aches

To seize

All that is

 

Celestial.

Reviews

[ChemicalMadness]

Nice parallel. Your work has an unassuming simplicity about it that quietly reveals a bright mind at work.

CM.

[devon]

Thank you so much. That was such a huge compliment!

[ChemicalMadness]

I'm a fan of simplicity myself ;)

[devon]

I'm glad!

[kublakhan27]

I love the imagery of stars and planets and celestial things here...very cool piece :)

[devon]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure :)