Ironically

Ironically

A Poem by devon

I always found it funny,

 

How your arms were always

The safest place that I knew,

And how those very same

Arms so easily ripped

My heart in two.

 

But I never laughed.

© 2013 devon


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devon
Been thinking about how ironic love can be.

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Mir
Love can be such a good thing yet such a terrible thing. I love the title! It reminds me of an Alanis Morisette song, called "Ironic" haha.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

devon

11 Years Ago

I don't think I've heard of it, before. Hmm... I'll have to give it a looksie!
how exactly did those arms rip your heart in 2 ???

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good point. The same hands that heal can hurt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the way your first and last lines encapsulate the body of the prose. A beautifully written piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the word. "Ironically". You are right. Funny how things can change with people we open doors for and are closed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

devon

11 Years Ago

Thank you for calling my poem excellent. :) I'm glad you liked it!
It really is... :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

devon

11 Years Ago

I know. But there will be tons more of good memories to come!
Aly Jones

11 Years Ago

:) Thanks.
devon

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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