A World So Dark

Sometimes, I visit a world inside my head.

Fireworks, I had thought at first,

But then I realized

The memories that haunt me most,

Flash across the twilight.

But in this world, there is no sky to call night.

There is only blackness. 

Vanished is the light,

In this world inside my head,

There is only the dark.

Reviews

[-Alice Rose]

I love this Dev. Good Job :)

[devon]

Thank you :)

[Akshat♥]

I hope the darkness inside your head vanish soon :)
Its in the viewer's eyes that what he/she sees...
Dark Or bright light...
nicely written piece,keep writing!! :)

[devon]

Thank you!!

[Akshat♥]

You are always welcome dear :)

[Sami Khalil]

There is only blackness
vanished is the light.
Nice write.

[devon]

Thanks! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome .

[Kohleen]

Ooh i so dearly like this poem :) I think you did a fantabulous job with imagery and just the thought of it all is quite intriguing. Great job ;)

[devon]

Thank you!