Emotions

Emotions

A Poem by Thief of Nightmares
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I'm running out of ideas

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Joy:The feeling I get whenever I see those baby blue eyes (but who doesnt?).

Fear:that it seems from your heart It seems I am always distant

Ostentation:How I try to show you that I am worthy of your attention

Distress:That you may hate these poems I have written

Envy:For those who have already stolen your heart.

Anxiety:That it may be too late to win you over

Anticipation:That in this game we call love, I may be the winner

Longing:That someday you might be my girl

Optimism:That i send your heart a-whirl

 

And Finally:

 

Love:The most beautiful feeling of all, a combination of all feelings, the one that all feel when there eye's fall upon a beauty such as yourself   

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Thief of Nightmares


Author's Note

Thief of Nightmares
Ignore Grammar, spelling.Just a brief brain storm

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Ha ! Told you ! you are good with emotions . could use some polishing , and i think u accidentally screwed up the line on Fear ; "it seems from your heart it seems i am always distant ." I love the line dont get me wrong, but you need to take out one of the "it seems"s . i would suggest teh second one so it reads "It seems from your heart I am always distant ." Nice write !

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Thief of Nightmares
Thief of Nightmares

Boston, MA



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Dweller of the shadow realm. Teenager. Hopelessly in love with a girl who doesn't know I exist.I have terrible grammar and spelling. Roman Catholic. Norse Mythology.Is it copyright to move poems you w.. more..

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