I Don't Know

Ghosts from the past

 

Don’t know why she seems so far

Don’t know how to play her song

Does she really want in my world?

Would she stay very long?

Would her eyes look another way?

When I am not around

Will she reach beyond my touch?

For what she wants I haven’t found

Does her mind yet wander on?

My thoughts carry me away

Will she ever talk to me?

If she has something to say

Will I meet all her needs?

Will she tell me or walk away?

Is my heart old on her?

Will she let me see?

Or will her feet pick her up?

And go on, tired of me

Why is it that I can’t just know?

When something is so wrong

And she won’t let me in

To see what I may be doing wrong

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Reviews

[Kat]

i have this feeling about a lot of things, and i hate not knowing how someone feels. i'm the kind of person who just wants to fix everyone and i get really frustrated when i can't. i really like this one! i like how a lot of your pieces pertain to faith, and i look forward to seeing more from you.
also, thankyou for the reviews! they were greatly appreciated (:

[novellababe]

I feel like this a lot. Not about girls, obviously, lol, but I wish sometimes I could just know what someone is thinking, I can't stand not knowing.

I really like this. It reminds a lot of song lyrics, of something I might hear from an alternative rock band or something. I give it a 9/10!