The Real You

Ghosts from the past

 

Just a mortal man

All I’ll ever be

Though there’s something still inside

That says there’s more to me

At times I’ll lose direction

And then I go no where

Not sure where my path will lead

Not even sure I care

Some how or another

The message still comes through

Though you look so many places

You have the real you

Reviews

[BEEGE]

This was nice man!
I can say that I've felt that way before and will
Again at some point I'm sure. Also, it's short enough where
It doesn't lose the readers attention, but still long enough to
Make your point. I think it was pretty good overall.