it's forceful ways

Why did I think it?

Why won’t it leave?

I don’t want to do this to u,

But curiosity is working its way.

i feel worst when they come,

but its so hard to pull away.

i don't want to do it,

but something pulls me closer to its way.

why wouldn't it leave me?

is it trying to ruin everything?

does it want me alone,

sad, depressed, and afraid?

does it want me to suffer,

and painfully to have its way?

i don't understand at all,

why it pulls me?

i don't understand at all,

why i tried go its way?

what is wrong with me?

why do i feel so scared?

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

Im sure this peice had a direction but I'm not sure you actually conveyed the desired effect in the poem. The repeated use of it, especially through lines 5 -11, kind of gets the reader lost but not in a sense of Forcefulness but more desperation and undo suspense like watching a horror flick where you now there is a monster you can see the subject is terrified but the character never comes into contact w/ the monster... the monster never actually ever appears. I can kinda see what you were going for just work on the descriptive placement and getting to the heart of the IT.