Inseparable

 

 

 

May your sunlight remain

entangled in my hair

 

May your dust

fill the corners of my house

one that can never be swept away

 

May your cherry blossoms come,

and unbearably sweeten my rivers

a memory that eternally serves

as sugar at teatime

 

May our twilights mix together

like breath and breathlessness

 

May our snowflakes mingle, mid-air

like a loving heart and tenderness

hitting the earth as one

 

in a world full of parting,

may we be eternally entwined...

like dark blue and blueberries,

 

like bookmark and a favorite page,

birds and birdsong

like water and thirst

pillow and sleep,

like fragrance and skin.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Dear Sanober... Your poetry touches my soul
like wisteria in the Spring lies softly on my mind.
truly... Pat

[ABetterPlace]

This took my breath away. So beautifully phrased - it really captures that longing to dissolve into someone else.

[Karen]

This is a beautiful poem! I love the way your words describe so much more through images and analogies. And I truly love the last three stanzas! So creative and engaging!

[Lydia Shutter]

"Like fragrance and skin"...my dear, that is how you and poetry are intertwined. You express emotion like no one else can. The lines drip with romance and sweet simile. Meaningful metaphors dance from your fingertips when you write....I am convinced of that.
"May our twilights mix together
like breath and breathlessness"
This line made me think of the old saying "opposites attract". To be able to sate someone's breathlessness with your breath....what a concept! Sanober, this is superbe poetry! Lydi**

[Melissa S]

This is really beautiful. At times there seemed to be too many commas that slowed the writing down for me, but that just may be your style.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem!

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is breath takingly beautiful my friend.Would that we could have this in our life .The other person that makes us whole :)

[Sami Khalil]

What can I say. I love this write. I'm breathing in its breathless beauty...:).....................