what am I to do

what am I to do

A Poem by lookforthegreens

It just stopped.
and what was I to do?
I know no me in this vast space that survives without a you.
so how I to execute?

how am I to breathe?

my first breath was from sight of yours.

so I have no words to seethe.

so how am I to love some more.
how am I to talk.
my only passion to you I swore.
so now I simply gawk.

© 2010 lookforthegreens


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This is powerful, concise and so at a loss, wonderful work love!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good emotion and intensity......well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


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lookforthegreens
lookforthegreens

portsmouth, VA



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