I can make it better i swear

I can make it better i swear

A Poem by Dave

How can i say the words,
To unbreak your heart,
I didnt mean to do it,
Things just fell apart.

Maybe one day we'll look back,
Laugh at how we were,
Maybe one day we'll be together,
But right now that days too far.

If i could change the world,
If i could move the sky,
The stars would spell the sorrow that i feel,
I'll do anything to make it right.

But you don't hear,
No, your not near,
All i feel is pain,
I wish you'd come make it dissapear.

Whatever is wrong,
Whatever stops you,
I can make it better I swear,
Just let me hold you again.
 

© 2008 Dave


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Beautifully written...I can feel your pain through your words....Awesome!

Posted 17 Years Ago


Such a sweet poem that shows the devotion a person can feel even after a loss. "The stars would spell the sorrow that i feel." A powerful line and my favorite. Keep up the wonderful work!

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Dave
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What words can I use to describe me? My words are broken, brain tattered and torn I cant seem to capture my true form. Words they help me ease the passing time and the tribulations of life. But don't .. more..

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