I see Me

I see Me

A Poem by Dave

I see in faded images,
the choices I have made,
An wonder if i'd walked another path,
What would my life have been?

What experiences would I have had?
What man would i become?
I see a thousands visions,
Of things I might have done,

But as i sit and write,
An contemplate my life,
At least I know within myself,
I am a man I like.

© 2008 Dave


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i'd - either keep all 'i''s capitalized or not, unless there is a significant meaning.
You write some great poetry - but try reading some different styles as well. best of luck

Posted 16 Years Ago


Absolutely Wonderful....You are full of Talent....This says so much about who you are...Awesome!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 24, 2008

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Dave
Dave

Sheffield, United Kingdom



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What words can I use to describe me? My words are broken, brain tattered and torn I cant seem to capture my true form. Words they help me ease the passing time and the tribulations of life. But don't .. more..

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