evocative of something in and on a grand scale...and yet with such descriptives as nothing echoe longing vaccuum and void to effectively reflect that something haunts as an absentee...i see the pearls fall...hear their thud thud thud thud upon the floor and sense some deep and eternal sadness in the song that never began...it is a song all the same...creating a sad ambience for which...i suppoose...you were aiming...strong piece...i respect and appreciate its existence...
I see beauty in your words here and I really like this but I'm not too sure what is happening but I think there is some sort of celebration going on for you son, perhaps in a church.
I have read this poem several times now, I will be adding it to my library for although I can see the beauty I can't understand all the meaning yet....ironically my Grandsons name was Christian also :)
Peace
Please, if you wish to send a friend request, read something of mine first (you may find that you hate me!)
Also, please note, that while I try, I do not comment on others great works as much as I s.. more..