Deja Vu

Sometimes I truly wonder,

If my mind is sinking under,

A sea of dark confusion,

Leaving nothing but illusion.

I know not the time,

I saw this place,

nor heard these sounds,

or kissed that face.

Nor why it is,

that this was lost,

like fallen leaves,

in winter's frost.

Sometimes I truly wonder.

Author's Note

I wanted to express the feeling of deja vu without over-thinking it. So I gave myself just five minutes to write a poem. As it turns out, this took me just a hair over three. Enjoy.

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

EWell this peom described the feeling perfectly. I loved the flow and how poetic it was. great write!

[Jordan Easley]

I liked the second stanza the best. I always have to slow down to catch the true meaning of the line. Your writing is very mature. Good job

[Rox Bain ☮]

This flows very well. I love the idea of Deja Vu and the last line is really effective.
Well written :)

[Walker Andreasen]

I love the flow of this poem; how short it is yet to the point. Bravo, good sir. Writing points for you.

[Sujash I. Purna]

Great job mate! I often wonder too! But could never come up with this pithy piece of poetry!