No Hope of a Party

Where do we go

from here?

All I can sense

is fear.

We are alone.

We're left behind.

I search inside,

Such frights to find.

What should I feel 

right now?

Angry or sad?

But how

Can I make sense?

This is a mess.

Where do I run?

Who do I bless?

Where is the God

I've known?

Where is the king,

his throne?

Where is my life

And Where is my Death

And Who are you to

Draw my final breath?

Where did I stray?

Where did I fall?

Who is my God?

Who is my all?

Where did bones break?

Where did earth cry?

Who am I today?

Who and what and why

Am I alive?

Am I asleep?

Can I take a breath?

Can I be a sheep

So I can be slaughtered

Am I a man?

Who is this God?

What is his plan?

What can I say?

And what can I prove?

You held it in long

Until you were moved

And now I am moved

To scream out aloud

and hate this world

But wear it proud.

I know that I'm lost

I know that I'm saved

But if it's alright

Why Am I So

Afraid?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing flow of thoughts led to very good ending. I like the poetry that ends with a question. Thank you Dante for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Moonlight]

It is a very deep read. To be honest, I couldn't fully understand what you wanted to convey. From what I got, I could tell that the person is confused and in angst. He is desperate to find some reason in his life. Some balance maybe. Justification even.

To me, it felt like a complicated maze of emotions delivered through your poem.
Nevertheless, I did enjoy reading it. It is an intriguing and deep piece.

Thanks for the read request Dante.

Cheers! :)

-moonlight

[Not here]

Thank you Moonlight :) It's definitely complicated lol. I'm just glad you enjoyed it!

[Devious13]

that is deeper then alot of pieces, most wont know this pain to fully understand the depths of which it is born , i think it is remarkable that is for sure ! way to go

[Not here]

Thank you devious :) I really appreciate it!

[Devious13]

No problem my friend keep up the great work ..all my support