The Secretive Priest (Short Poem)

I killed a man.

He called my name.

I killed him as I lost the game.

I killed a girl.

She told me so.

I killed her as I painted snow.

I killed a boy.

He cried to me.

I killed him as I set him free.

I have a secret.

No one knew.

I had a secret. I'll show you.

Author's Note

If you want to personal message me, I'll give you the meaning of this poem to me, but otherwise I keep things a secret. I'll gladly let you know if you personal message me.

Reviews

[Riley Justine]

I kinda love this...
The mystery added to it honestly makes it so much better.
You can take it literally, emotionally, maybe about a mental illness.
Any way you interpret it it is amazingly written and flows really well.

[Not here]

Thanks Riley :) That's a good guess at it! I really appreciate all the reviews, I can't say that enough. thank you so much.

[Emily]

Awesome poem!
Loved it!
Keep it up!!

[Not here]

Thanks Emily :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Strange ans mysterious poem, Dante. Well done, thank you for sharing this riddle/poem with us. :) Rudi

[Not here]

Thanks Rudi :) I really appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I wanted to read and know more. You left a wide open ending. Thank you Dante for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Not here]

Thanks :) I appreciate the review and i'm glad you liked it. That was the feel I was aiming for.

[Coyote Poetry]

You reached your goal and you are welcome.

[Stan Lee]

Scary! This sounds really dark. I hope the true meaning is less sinister than what i am envisaging! Nice rhythm & rhyming Dante. :)

[Not here]

Thanks smiley face :) And the world may never know. Whawhawha.

[H.L. Cerveise]

This is a very haunting writing. I like the stanza breakdown and the flow within each stanza. The last line, "I had a secret. I'll show you..." sure makes me not want to let her show me her secret, big grin. Only one small typo, you line, "I killer her as I painted snow..." should be killed right?

Well done.

[Not here]

Yes very true on the typo. I"ll fix it. Thanks for catching it. And I'm really glad you liked the poem :)