Undecisive Indecisions

I kind of feel

a little bit cold,

just a bit old,

turning to mold.

I kind of think

I'm losing my time,

forgetting the rhyme,

becoming a mime.

I kind of lost

a little bit more,

shoved by the door,

lost on the shore.

And kind of not.

I kind of miss

that meaningful smile,

staying for a while,

lasting through all trial.

I kind of hope

we can be held.

I am compelled.

We always yelled.

I kind of love

the depressing song,

and singing along.

Swallowed by the throng.

I kind of wish

on the shooting star.

Wherever you are,

I hope you're not far.

And kind of not.

Reviews

[Riley Justine]

The flow of this is amazing. I love the simplicity yet it still holds so much power and emotion. Really well written. You conveyed strong emotions of confusion here which I really liked. Awesome piece!

[Not here]

Thank you Riley :) I really appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful flow of thoughts led to open ending. You led the reader on a journey leading to possibilities. Thank you Dante for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Not here]

Thanks Coyote :) I appreciate it!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Dante.

[Amy R]

Again this is a greatly inked poem!
keep it going David! :)

[Not here]

thanks im glad you liked it :)

[Amy R]

ur welcome :))

[Emily]

Very nice flow!
Keep on writing!!

[Not here]

thank you emily :)

[andrew mitchell]

nice rhythm and flow to this one dante

[ApKWrites]

Great piece...I love it!!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

This poem has a very good rhythm, when you read it out loud it's sounds a bit like a rap song. Well done, Dante. :) Rudi

[Not here]

Thanks Rudi :) I appreciate it very much!

[H.L. Cerveise]

I enjoyed the rhymes and the rhythm of this poem. Often we are thrust into situations just like you are writing about. I love the use of the word kind throughout the verses. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Well done.

[Not here]

No problem :) I am very glad you liked it.