Last Trip to the Hospital

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I saw my reflection as

a car was speeding by.

The windows tinted black

were a mirror for the sky.

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The building windows gleamed

like stars hidden by a cloud,

as the fog rolled in

and sirens were blaring loud.

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I rode through the whole town,

traveling much too fast.

Speeding almost twice as quick,

I watched the town fly past.

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My head was throbbing still,

though I'm not quite sure why.

And as the doors opened,

I wished that I could cry.

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Silence hugged me tight

as they lowered down my bed.

The wheels were rusty but

we started up ahead.

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I felt the sidewalk pass

and my breathing hollowed out.

I knew I would miss this life.

I knew without a doubt.

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They opened up the doors,

and I heard them shout my name.

As they pushed me down the hall,

I thought I should take the blame.

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Before much time had passed,

every beep was another breath.

And with every jagged line,

my heart inched closer to death.

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Reviews

[Emily]

Loved this!
I really the the story line!
Keep it up!!

[Not here]

thank you emily :)) im very glad