Funeral of a Wedding

I think I might just fall in love tonight (tonight)

I'm really not sure if I think it's right (tonight)

But even so I'll fall in love tonight (tonight)

Even so I'll fall in love tonight. (Right?)

I'm trying not to let it show,

'cause I don't want you to know.

I think this feels somewhat right,

but I'm not really sure tonight.

I'm trying not to let you in

'cause I don't want to begin

to imagine what if it went wrong.

Could we still sing our song?

I think I went and fell in love tonight (tonight)

I'm really not sure if I think it's right (tonight)

But even so I fell in love tonight (tonight)

Even so I fell in love tonight. (Right?)

I'm trying not to make a choice

'cause I'm scared of my cracking voice.

What if you think I'm not right?
What if you leave me tonight?

I'm trying not to let my head

take back everything I said.

I really want to love you more.

What about all the things we swore?

I'm sorry if you're not in love tonight (tonight)

I'm really not sure who of us is right (tonight)

But even if we fell in love tonight (tonight)

will you promise me to love me right? (for life)

Did we really fall in love that night? (tonight)

I'm really not sure if we got it right (tonight)

But promise me that you will hold me tight (tonight)

and I will promise to be yours tonight (tonight)

I'm thinking that I've made my choice.

Take all of me and take my voice.

Make me remember what we said.

Kiss me and get into my head.

I'm starting to forget my name.

I'm starting to feel so much shame.

Thinking that I've got insane.

Thinking that I'll drown in rain.

Tell me if we fell in love last night (tonight)

Tell me that we both are right tonight (tonight)

I don't really need to be more right (tonight)

So hold me.

Reviews

[KittyKatgirl]

Wow this is so powerful and beautiful. This literally brought tears to my eyes it has so much beauty to it. Correct me if I am mistaken but to me it sounds like a song and I could hear someone singing it inside my head as I read it. David this is by far my favourite poem by you. I am shameful to admit I've still been to busy to choose a top 5 but this is number 1. I can't believe that somehow I still am surprised by how amazing your writing is. Well deserved rating 100/100

[Not here]

lol that's okay :) I'm honored that you would make a top 5 at all. that's like a dream of mine to have someone do that for me. and yes this was written to be a song. i mean i wrote it listening to a song so yeah lol. thank you alot though for everything :) i appreciate it

[KittyKatgirl]

Haha awesome then I better quickly make your dream come true lol. And you are most welcome and thank you. :)

[Not here]

:) hehe. have a nice day.

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you, you too. :) Or night lol, pending on what time it is there.

[Not here]

its like 9ish so probably gnight because i'm tired *yawn*

[KittyKatgirl]

Haha ok goodnight lol.

[Not here]

goodnight *yawn* *Yawn* *yawn*