Problematic Addict

I hope that I

can be your only guy.

Hold you while you cry.

Never say goodbye.

If you were ever mine,

I would make you shine.

You'e the queen of cloud nine.

Nobody can define.

If you saw what I see,

you'd understand that we

were truly meant to be.

You wouldn't disagree.

So if I fall apart,

please lend me a fresh start.

Don't leave me; don't depart.

Free my imprisoned heart.

Will you be all I need?

Please don't ever mislead.

I'm starting to lose speed.

I can't hope to succeed.

My stress is well-renowned

but still you drag me down,

shatter my only crown,

and I'm run out of town.

(y)Our problems run abound.

I'm ground into the ground.

I try not to make a sound.

Guess I'll see you around.

I believe in what we've got,

and of love we've got a lot.

But you tear me down for sure.

Can I do this anymore?

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Well give yourself a few years and revisit your early loves. Many loves you may have in your life and each will appear to be the only one and you want to show them how you love, but wait there is more than one for each of us, so if this one fades and loses luster, just look around and grab hold of the next one that comes to town.

Nice piece with good flow. You are a very good poet and this was a good length. Hahaha

[Not here]

thank you very much willard :) and looking back on love there is a lot to learn from past experiences. im glad you enjoyed this

[AaronFreitas]

This is an awesome write with great flow and rhyming my friend. I write in this style a lot as it is a fun style to write. I really love the word choices in this one... excellent write :)

[Not here]

thanks aaron :) and you very well in this style. it is alot fun to write. i appreciate your review

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Sometimes in a relations there are certain questions we have to ask ourselves. But to much questions are a sign on the wall that there's a problem with the relation I guess. Well done, Dante. :) Rudi

[Not here]

thank you very much rudi :) im glad you liked this