Romantics in the Dark

I'll delay
and I will stay
through all the wintry nights.

I'll hold you

like I've told you.
I'll love you through the fights.

I'll console
your hurting soul
and every single day

whenever the storm

begins to swarm

I will never sway.

Our love won't break.

Every mistake

brings me closer still to you.

I promise we

will live happily

ever after. Just us two.

When our fairy tale

my life derailed

I thought it might be the end.

But instead I found

in the madness around

something much more than a friend.

So let me hold you here tonight,

and never let you go.

Let me tell you pretty thoughts

that you would never know.

Let me feel your every breath

and be your only light.

'Cause I would fight off even death

to hold you close tonight.

Reviews

[Moonlight]

Gentle and beautifully sweet write Dante. Thanks for the read request. I enjoyed reading it.

-moonlight

[Not here]

Thanks Moonlight :) I appreciate it!

[Moonlight]

You're welcome :)

[Riley Justine]

This is such a gentle, romantic poem. Not at all what I'm used to you writing! But I really like it and it is beautifully written, well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and sweet words leading to perfect ending.
"Let me feel your every breath
and be your only light.
'Cause I would fight off even death
to hold you close tonight."
No weakness in the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[Not here]

thank you very much coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Astrid Blake]

Very sensual, and of course, romantic. Really liked it! Nice job on descriptions of a relationship. ☺☺☺☺
~~The Cheshire Cheese Cat

[Not here]

thank you cheshire cheese cat :) gosh thats hard to type. your rapper name can be Tripple-C like tripple a batteries but different

[Astrid Blake]

Hahahahaha. It gets easier once you type it over and over again. You can call me Cheshire or Blake, I practically reaspond to anything. XD

[Not here]

lol alright :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

This poem was sweet, romantic and sensual.. Keep up the hard work.. This is actually one out of my other favorite poems that you have written.. Great job Dante... And keep up the hard work. You write such great romantic poems!!!

[Not here]

thank you :) and its bc my girls so great. but ill keep it up lol

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Aww.. someone is in love.. Awe.. lol.. keep up the hard work lil bro.. if you keep writing sweet poems like that then your girl will stay with you forever.. has she read any of them yet??

[Not here]

nah i dont show them to her lol. i wrote her one kind of but mainly we just talk and stuff. she's read some of my stories.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Oh I see.. you gotta show her sweetie.. she might really love them.. you never know till you try.. love you lil bro

[Brittany Bostic]

Such a simple message and yet conveyed in such a complex and unique way. I really enjoyed this poem and the story that it followed from beginning to end. It was easy to follow and very romantic. I like it.

[Not here]

thank you brittany :) glad that you liked it. i appreciate your review

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful romantic poem about love, Dante. Well done, I like it. :) Rudi

[Not here]

thanks rudi :) im glad you liked it

[Imperfection2aT]

Beautiful symbols throughout the poem. This is what love truly is, and I feel that you've captured it quite well.

[Not here]

thank you :) i appreciate all of your reviews as of late

[andrew mitchell]

Well written piece on the ups and downs of love!

[Not here]

thank you andrew :) i appreciate all your reviews

[Willard Wells]

Very strong piece with lots of images to process. Love through anything is what it takes. And two truly on the same path and journey. May your path always be happy in the end with your love to ride along.

[Not here]

thank you willard :) i appreciate that