absolute pleasure in reading this poem, makes me feel of some emotions strongly by bringing tears into my eyes. I read a no. of poems but review only the most liked ones and this is one of those...
really fantastic, i loved the way you had put the rhyming words, i love having rhyming words in my poems but sometimes, i try for non-rhyming too. your poem talks about the truth and reality; loved your poem...
thanks for sharing 'regrets...'
Anindita
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you very much Anindita :) I really appreciate it
"Though our lips never met,
our eyes lingered still"
"I never looked back,
and was never forced to see
the tears in your eyes
as I left quietly."
These stanzas actually made the depth of the piece very clear. Just as a crystal.
All in all, I really loved this poem. Have I told you, that you are a really good writer? Well if not, here it is. You write really good. Your writings have meaning and they just speak to the readers for themselves.
Great work! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thank you moonlight :) ill be sure to keep writing. i really appreciate your reviews
I never told you how
I felt for you in truth.
So I stand here regretting
you never saw proof.
what if is the saddest question ever penned my friend because it is the one with out an answer. Your execution was flawless and breathtaking! I really appreciete that your poems are always visually pleasing and easy on the eyes
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thank you crystal :) and yeah i try to make them the most enjoyable they can be for the readers
This is so sad. But it was truly beautiful, I agree with silent all these years it is something that everyone can relate to they regret doing something but by then it's too late. Great job :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thank you crystal :) i have too much experience with stuff like this lol
Ok so, I like it. I think it's sweet but it leaves me with questions. I appreciate the mystery and in all honesty I have no idea what to say so I am in fact rambling on. This being said I sincerely apologize for my uh.. Actually maybe I don't. It's a thought process I'm getting there. Did you know it's a common misconception people have with writer's they say we always have words. That's not true you only have something to say depending on the situation and your feelings towards it. well, that's my opinion or experience at least. Now that I have that out of the way. I like it, I've nothing to add and nothing to take away. Sorry.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
lol no problem :) and even if you just ramble, it makes it look like a really good review. i appreci.. read morelol no problem :) and even if you just ramble, it makes it look like a really good review. i appreciate the review no matter how it is
9 Years Ago
Dante, you're so incredibly easygoing it's almost a problem. I want to take my hat off to you and si.. read moreDante, you're so incredibly easygoing it's almost a problem. I want to take my hat off to you and simultaneously slap you with my glove. You're awesome.
lol thanks :) or you could just take ur hat off and slap me with it. problem solved
9 Years Ago
But that depends on the hat. You can't slap someone with a top hat, it looks silly. Plus I don't wan.. read moreBut that depends on the hat. You can't slap someone with a top hat, it looks silly. Plus I don't want to slap you, that's not very nice.