She (Poem)

She watches all; She watches you.

If she does call, do not go through.

She sees you there; She's looking down.

Within her snare, it is her town.

They try to run; they try to hide.

It has begun. This is a ride.

Lurking along, the streets are dark.

Hearing her song, they lose the spark.

Wishing for peace, they lose their breath.

Finding release, there's only death.

Lonely and hurt, they try to find

peace and strength to help their mind.

Instead of hope, they find the dark.

Instead of joy, they've lost the spark.

Fear is a ride, and it will go

until you lose your mind and know

that turning back is not a choice.

With her hands, she takes your voice.

The town is shrinking over you.

Lies are what you once found true.

Chaos, madness, fear, and hate,

they are the only thing you see.

Darkness covers all your fate,

darkness until eternity.

Author's Note

The novel I am writing, called She, will be published on amazon sometime by the end of this year. I will put the first handful of chapters on here starting next month. This poem is just something inspired by the book, and a little teaser.

Reviews

[Kimberlee]

This is an amazing poem! I love the way it rhymes.

[Not here]

thanks :) i like to rhyme things

[Emily]

I love this one!!
Keep it up!
Congratulations on your book!

[Not here]

thanks :) you can congratulate me once im done with it

[Robert]

As I have mentioned before Dante you have a knack for words and the rhyme. It flows smoothly and its interesting to read.

[Not here]

thank you Robert :) i appreciate it

[Robert]

Sorry for the typos in that review, I did it from my phone but I fixed it.

[Not here]

no its fine. dont worry about it

[ANTO]

I like this. Its a good flowing, rhyming piece Dante and a good way to 'spark' an interest - quite inventive.
Thanks for the RR my friend.

[Not here]

no problem :) thanks for reading. and love your pic

[WordShaker33]

Amazing poem, very interesting. I can't wait to read the book. Thanks for sharing.

[Not here]

thanks for reading :)

[closed]

wow, this is going to be based on a whole novel youre writing?
that's pretty kool

seems like you could be writing about a fictional cult or something
either way it seems like it'll be awesome

[Not here]

thanks dream :) i hope itll be good

[Willard Wells]

She sounds like a rather nasty b***h. Lots of imagery within the writing. Thanks,

[Not here]

lol she most certainly is :) and thanks

[Stan Lee]

Sounds pretty grim...
The rhythm and rhyming are perfect as usual.
Well done Dante. :)

[Not here]

thanks :) and it is more sad in the book i just didnt convey tht part as well

[Stan Lee]

Grim is sad... I definitely felt the sad too.

[Not here]

okay. well thats good in a rather sickening sort of way. idek lol