Writer Blocked by Writer's Block

Writer Blocked by Writer's Block

A Poem by Not here
"

Writer's block. Don't you hate it?

"
I'm a little bit
writer's blocked.
My brain is a little
over-locked.
Ever heard of a
mind-rocked
hurt and beaten man.
They mocked.

I'm kind of sick and tired
of spending my whole life wired
to do things that expired
long ago. I should be fired
and never ever rehired
because I look inspired
to go back. Reacquired
sayings are the required
peace of info. Admired
are those who never tired
of being the best. Transpired
events I never look back on.
Those things are very much gone.
I take over like Genghis Khan,
reclining on the front lawn
of living my life thereupon,
being who I have to be.
I'm forced to fight, and forced to see
pieces of me I never could be.
Why be me? 
Why set free
loose-leaf trees 
on bended knee?
Agree with me 
that I could flee,
instead of be
and try to foresee
the future. We
are just crazy.
I feel lazy,
so now sorry.
I'm out the door,
not on the floor.
Should I soar?
Should I do more?
Most of all, can I change your
life with words I say. Adore
me or adore me not, sure.
Now, I will try to find a cure
for this writer's block mentality.
To be honest, the brutality
of this is above normality.
Now, I need to go back into my large stock
and dig deeper. Curse this writer's block!

© 2015 Not here


Author's Note

Not here
I have serious writer's block, so I just rhyme random things. Not my best work, but sometimes it's just good to put something down, even if it isn't gonna win any contests or change any lives or anything.

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For a writer's block, this seems very unblocked! Hope you cure yourself of this unfortunate malady soon my friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not here

9 Years Ago

this was a while ago, i think im all good now :)
Nadia Gerassimenko

9 Years Ago

excellent!!!
Even with writers block this is still really good, very creative (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not your best, but its still good. Even with writers block you can write a decent poem. Keep it up this is good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


"Now, I need to go back into my large stock
and dig deeper. Curse this writer's block!"
I use Leonard Cohen, Lana Del Rey and J.B Harvey. Always their song defeat my writer's block. Sometime a walk into a forest or by a lake/ocean if you are lucky. Kill the writer's block. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 9 Years Ago


hi David, your poem, 'Writer Blocked by Writer's Block' is one of the finer poems I've read on this site ... so far ... so good. In fact, very good and I like the rhyme. Keep writing, please. I think you are quite creative.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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david, I think that you took the BLOCK out of writer's block with this well-written piece. It seems natural and the rhymes don't seem at all forced, which is great. My feeling on the novelty-theme that the shaping of the text is configured into is this: this is fine to present this way, but do so very sparingly. Like not for a good while now. The reason is you do not want the zigzag design of the write to distract readers from the message you wish to impart. Trust yourself that the write is effective enough without the gimmicky format. Nice job, david. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not here

9 Years Ago

thanks dan :) i appreciate it
Liked the poem a lot.
Just a friendly suggestion, sir, try blank verse :)
Maumil

Posted 9 Years Ago


You've got a magic with words! Great work david :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Writer's block is an all too familiar experience. It sucks.

However, the poem was pretty good anyway!

- Brittney

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yep...familiar situation...i mean the writers block. Yes, the best thing to do is probably to write it out. I did it a couple of times.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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