Make Some Noise

Make Some Noise

A Poem by Not here

Hey, all of you, my faithful fans!
Guess who's back with a new game plan?
And what I mean is I got more than
a bunch of words from my garbage can.

This time I got real rhymes,
and none of it's considered to be crimes
that I know of so I'll keep dropping dimes
on the unsuspecting head of primes.

Not exactly Prime Ministers
or even Optimus Prime finishers.
But yet they call me sinister
for dropping rhymes on these big sirs.

Did that seem a little forced to you?
It's ok; be honest and tell the truth.
Sometimes I get caught up in my own brew
of trouble-making, stirred and shaken too.
Drink it like a cup of tea. Whew,
this one stinks like poo. Who
in the world gave this? Beef stew?
Since when did I order this pot of flu?
See these are the problems I accrued
as my fame continually grew to
unimaginable limits due
to my freakishly fast flows. You
couldn't stop this if you put it through
a blender, editor, and 500 reviews.

What do those three all have in common with me?
500 reviews, a blender, and an editor? See,
I'll never have any. They're absentees.

But now they're all lookin at me like I've got the force?
Who am I? Anakin Skywalker? Some dark horse?
Nah, dog, I'm just one of the boys.
And now more than ever I'm poised
to step out here and just enjoy
being myself and make my noise.

© 2015 Not here


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I loved it!!
Well done!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


You should totally write raps, you would be great!!!!! Good poem buy the way too ;-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Yeah toats!!!
Not here

9 Years Ago

:) lol yeah
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

:-D.....................
Haha.. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :D
Seemed a bit forced rhythm but you've got your justification "Sometimes I get caught up in my own brew of trouble-making, stirred and shaken too." ;) It was like drinking cup of coffee(enjoyed it as much, I don't like tea XD)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Do make some noise, David, I like the sound of it. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yeah, you seriously need to be a rapper...lol
Why are you so good at rhyming?!?!? I'm jealous!
I seriously enjoyed it though!
Always be yourself :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not here

9 Years Ago

yeah i know he does alot. but he is a beast rapper
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Ikr! He's great!
Not here

9 Years Ago

yeah :) totes

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Added on March 19, 2015
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