To You

Read this at night when it is totally dark and you are alone if you want a scare.

To Whoever is Reading This;

Close your blinds. Shut the door. Lock it. There are things outside. Things that want you. They will find you. They will capture you and bind you forever. Lock every window and every door. Do not look outside. They will see you looking and will come to see you too. They are, even now, creeping in closer...and closer...and closer. Soon you will be able to smell them. Hear them. Feel them. Can you feel them now? Can you feel the tightness in your stomach or the beating of your heart. Enjoy it while you can. It will be gone not too long from now, and it is then that you will feel true pain. Do not let them find you. You must hide. You must survive. Call someone. You need help. You cannot make it alone. I am warning you. Do you not believe me? Do you think this is just a joke? It is your life, my friend, and I will be sure to attend your funeral. Good luck getting out of this one alive. I know that you cannot. 

Goodbye.

Reviews

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow just wow!!!!! That is so chilling and awesome!!!!!

[pj]

'By the pricking of my thumbs,
Something wicked this way comes.
Open, locks,
Whoever knocks.'
from Macbeth
Writing scary stuff is an art and fun. What you've written is good but sometimes I think an author can get carried away with himself and throw too much fake blood on the wall. Sometimes less is more. True fear happens in the readers imagination. I think at a minimum you could loose some of the sentences at the end.

[Cool Girl]

This was interestingly creepy..
I really like it though!
Sometimes at night, I feel like someone is trying to get me..
I guess it's because of all the murder mysteries I watch lol
Nice job! It was really fun to read :)

[Not here]

Lol you obviously need to watch less if you liked that. Haha

[Cool Girl]

Lol
But I like watching them xD