Fields of Despair

A little poem I wrote.

Silent fields of despair,

The tears everywhere.

above the pale blue moonlight sky,

through the dark I ride,

through the brewing revelations,

the fire still burns.

 

Silent fields of despair,

the tears everywhere,

beyond the mountains high,

all you hear is the bitter cry,

of the warrior inside.

 

Silent fields of despair,

the tears everywhere,

endlessly searching for love,

search the darkness,

search the light,

wherever you go, wherever you search,

your search will always end,

in the silent fields of despair.

Reviews

[Roshan Nair]

Great work man, really liked the imagery you associated with despair and its omnipresence in certain situations. Nice write! cheers :)

[Ryan Henderson]

Thanks for the review!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

You really captured the imagery of a knight who wont give up here, I don't like the capital T in "The" second line down as it isn't continued throughout, unless this is on purpose. Another great piece really wonderful flow to it congrats

[Ryan Henderson]

Thanks for the review!

[Sami Khalil]

Even in desperation some people can hold on to that warrior spirit. Excellent...:)..................

[Ryan Henderson]

Thank you for reviewing!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)......................

[Ashley Griffiths]

I like this piece. Great use of imagery, and an overall feeling of desperation.

[Ryan Henderson]

thank you for the review! I was not certain about posting this piece, and this review certainly was a booster!